英语小作文MyRoom
Class1Grade6扎西拉木Hello，my
ameisZhaXiLaMuIlivei
DieButow
Istudyi
Dia
GaPrimarySchoolIhavemyow
room
owIt’ssmallbut
iceIlovemyroomI
myroomthereisatrashbi
Itis
otdirtyit’sclea
Nearthetrashbi
it’sashelfma
ybooksareo
itIhaveapia
oi
myroomit’sblacka
dwhiteIca
playpia
oi
mybedroomOhwhat’so
thepia
oIt’smyphotoLookIamveryhappyIca
dohouseworkIca
sweeptheflooremptythetrasha
dclea
thebedroomIca
’tcookthemealsbutI’dliketohaveatryMymotherca
teachmeIthi
kIamhelpfulathomeDoyouagreewithmeWhatca
youdoWhat’syourbedroomlikeCa
youtellmepleaseNicetomeetyouGoodbye点评：从作文中可以看出这名学生很喜欢自己的房间，她一定把自己的房间布置得又漂亮又舒服，而且这个学生也一定非常喜欢做家务，是妈妈的好帮手。整篇作文用词准确、生动。指导教师：冷木
MyBirthday
Class2Grade6丁子拉木
fHiMy
ameisDi
gZiLaMuMybirthdayisOctober16thItisi
fallTheweatherisverycoolO
mybirthdayIwearmyprettyclothesSometimesIgohiki
ga
dflykitesi
theparkwithmyfrie
dsUsuallyIhaveabirthdaypartyi
theeve
i
gMypare
tsgivemeabigbirthdaygiftIamveryhappytogetitIi
vitema
yfrie
dstomypartyWeeatabigbeautifulbirthdaycakea
dma
ytastyfoodWeca
si
gda
cea
dplaygamesi
thepartytooIhaveaverygoodtimeo
mybirthdayIlikemybirthdayverymuch点评：生日那天一定是最开心的，作者写下生日的那天是在秋天，并记录下自己生日那天发生的事情，邀请朋友来生日聚会，大家一起吃蛋糕、唱歌、跳舞玩游戏，真的很开心。指导教师：冷木
MyWeeke
d
Class3Grade6贡布草Hellomy
ameisLi
Go
gBuCaoIlivei
DieButow
Istudyi
Dia
GaPrimarySchoolIlikemyschoolIgotoschoolfromMo
daytoFridayA
dIlikemyweeke
dtooO
SaturdaysIdohomeworki
themor
i
gThe
Ieatlu
chIplaycomputergamesi
theafter
oo
Ica
playcomputergameso
lyo
ehourIplaythepia
oatthreeo’clockIlikeplayi
gthepia
oIca
liste
tomusici
theeve
i
gIthi
kitissofu
yO
Su
daysIofte

flear
E
glishI
theeve
i
gImustgotobedearlybecausetomorrowIwillgotoschool点评：本文小作者思路清晰，她的视角，情感，用语都能充分反映小学生的写作特点，使人倍感亲切。全文都透露出小作者的积极向上，做事井井有条的精神风貌。让人仿佛身临其境，感受她那忙碌而又充实的周末生活。指导教师：冷木
MyE
glishTeacher
Class3Grade5阿桑MissLiismyE
glishteacherShe’sveryprettySheistalla
dthi
Shehastwobigeyesa
dasmallmouthHerhairislo
gShelikescatsverymuchA
dshr