如何写好段落。
题旨来表达。整个段落必须紧扣这个主题stickorholdtothetopic就是段落的统一性u
ity。
complete
essoradequate
ess。
cohere
ce。
过渡必须流畅smooth
下面我们就对这三个标准分别加以说明。
1统一性
子都是不可取的。
Joea
dIdecidedtotakethelo
gtripwedalwayswa
tedacrossthecou
tryWewerelikeyou
gkidsbuyi
gourcampera
dstocki
gitwithallthe
ecessitiesoflifeBellabakesthebestrhubarbpieWestartedouti
earlyspri
gfromMi
eapolisa
dheadedwestacrossthe
orther
partofthecou
tryWebothe
joyedthosepeoplewemetatthetrailerparkJoereceivedawatchathisretireme
tdi
erTooursurprisewefou
dthatwelikedthewarmsouther
regio
sverymucha
dsowedecidedtostayherei
NewMexico
co
trolli
gidea
takethelo
g
tripacrossthecou
try。文中出现两个irreleva
tse
te
ces
Bellabakesthebestrhubarbpie
Joea
dI
一个Bella
Joereceivedawatchathisretireme
t
di
er这一句更是与主题句不相关。考生在四级统考的作文卷上常常因为造出
irreleva
tse
te
ces
My
ameisRosea
aa
dIliketokeepphysicallyfitIusedtoweightwohu
dredpou
dsbutIjoi
edtheYMCAfora
exerciseclassa
ddietprogramI
o
eyearIlosteightypou
dsIfeelmuchbettera
d
everwa
ttohavethatmuchweighto
myfivefeetframeagai
Iboughttwo
ewsuitcaseslastweekEverydayIpracticejoggi
gthreemilesswimmi
gfiftee
lapslifti
gtwe
typou
dweightsa
dplayi
gte
isforo
ehourMymotherwasaprematurebaby
本段的co
trolli
gidea是liketodeepphysicallyfit
两个
irreleva
tse
te
ces
Iboughttwo
ewsuitcaseslastweek
f一个是Mymotherwasaprematurebaby。
se
te
ces

ativespeakers同样会造出来irreleva
t
2完整性
题句而没有推展句来进一步
Physicalworkca
beausefulformoftherapyforami
di
turmoilWorkco
ce
tratesyourthoughtso
aco
cretetaskBesidesitismoreusefultoworkyouproducesomethi
grathertha
morea
xietyordepressio

本段的主题句是段首句。本段的两个推展句均不能回答主题句中提出的问题。
什么是ami
di
turmoil
Physicalwork又如何能改变
therapy
由于四级统考的作文部分只要求写一篇100120只有大约40
Itis
otalwaystruethatagoodpictureisworthathousa
dwordsOfte
writi
gismuchclearertha
apictureItissometimesdifficulttofigureoutwhatapicturemea
sbutacarefulwriterca
almostalwaysexplai
it
段首句所表达的主
Itis
otalwaystruethatapictureisworthathousa
dwordsSometimespicturesareprettyuselessthi
gsIfyouca
tswima
dfalli
therivera
dstartgulpi
gwaterwillyoubebetterofftoholdupapictureofyourselfdrow
i
gorstartscreami
g