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droadshavebee
built
◆巧妙的改写
①O
ly等于
oo
ebut
O
lyTompassedtheexamlastweek改为：Noo
ebutTompassedtheexam
②assoo
as…可用Nosoo
er…tha
…Hardly…whe
…代替
Assoo
aswehadarrivedattheci
emathefilmstarted改为：Nosoo
erhadwearrivedattheci
ematha
thefilmstarted
③havesbsthdo
e
Thegirlwask
ockedoffherbicyclea
dbrokeherleg改为：Thegirlwask
ockedoffherbicyclea
dhadherlegbroke
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f④变换插入语的位置
Howevertheysuggestfeesshouldbechargedlow改为：Theysuggesthoweverfeesshouldbechargedlow
Ithi
kthisisagoodcha
ceforyoutoshowyoursi
gi
gtale
ta
dhowwellyou’velear
edChi
ese改为：Thisisagoodcha
ceforyouIthi
ktoshowyoursi
gi
gtale
ta
dhowwellyou’velear
edChi
ese
⑤用同位语代替非限制性定语从句
Meimeiwhoisseve
yearsoldhasbee
lear
i
gtorideabicycleforseveraldays改为：Meimeiagirlofseve
hasbee
lear
i
gtorideabicycleforseveraldays
◆其他
1注重句子的开头
①用with复合结构开头Withthesu
setti
gi
thewestwehadtowavegoodbyetotheworkers
Withhishelpwe’velear
edhowtoa
alyzea
dsettleproblems
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f②用非谓语动词形式开头I
ordertoimproveourE
glishourschoolhelda
E
glishco
test
Walki
gtowardstheci
emahemetaforeig
er
2长短句交错使用注意：应突出主题句长句子并非越长越好
◆相关过渡语
1表示时间顺序first，the
，afterwards，mea
while，later，firstofall，fi
ally，atlast等
2表示空间顺序
ear，
extto，farfrom，i
fro
tof，o
theleft，o
o
eside等
3表示比较、对照like，u
like，suchas，but，however，o
theotherha
d，o
theco
trary，
evertheless，otherwise等
4表示因果关系because，for，asaresult，therefore，thus等
5表示递进关系besides，what’smore，whatwasworse，moreover，furthermore，i
additio
等
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f6表示并列关系a
d，aswellas，also等7表示总结性i
ge
eral，i
aword，i
short，o
thewhole，tosumup，i
brief，toco
clude等
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