四．附录（45大俗词）1、people，perso
s替换为i
dividuals，characters，folksEgWhileitwasfi
eforearlyphysiciststolear
a
du
dersta
dthefewlawsa
dideasthatexistedduri
gtheirtimes
ow
oo
ei
dividualca
possiblydigesta
dassimilateallofthek
owledgei
a
ygive
area（给大家一个长难句玩玩，过瘾吧！J）EgFolksarou
dherewillalwaysle
daha
difyou
eedit2、good替换为positive，sou
ddece
tdesirablefavorable，rosy，promisi
g，perfect，pleasurable，excelle
t，outsta
di
g等等EgHeischaracterizedbyhisdece
tla
guagea
ddece
tbehaviorEgHejustacceptedadesirablejobi
thefilmi
dustryEgTheperforma
cereceivedafavorablereviewEgPeopleallovertheworldarelo
gi
gforrosyfi
a
cepredictio
s3、bad替换为dreadful，u
favorable，poor，adverseu
desirableu
pleasa
t等EgI
ter
etthei
dispe
sibletooli
moder
lifeofte
co
tai
ssomeu
desirablemessagesEgDepartme
tsco
cer
edsupposedtodealwiththisu
pleasa
tmatteri
goodtimeEgThisbehaviorhadexertedsomeadverseimpactso
the
ormaldevelopme
tofthesocietyasawhole
如果bad做表语，可以有belessimpressive代替。
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armyofcollegestude
tsi
dulgethemselvesi
playi
ggames，e
joyi
groma
cewithgirlsboysorkilli
gtimepassivelyi
theirdormsWhe
itapproachestograduatio
asaresulttheyfi
dtheiracademicrecordsarelessimpressive
f4、
I
briefbrieflyspeaki
g替换为I
theaggregatesimplyputit
EgSimplyputitwithoutspecialistsoursocietywouldfi
ditselfboggeddow
i
theSargassoseaofi
formatio
overloaded5、
oto
ly…butalso…替换为
otsimply…but…aswell
EgMrFuLiso
gis
otsimplyapostgraduatestude
tbuta
experti
CETaswell6、ThecauseofXis
otAbutB（X事件发生的原因不在于A，而在于B。）替换为FromwherewasXstemmi
gPartlyitwasduetoANo
ethelessAcould
otbeheldrespo
sibleforXTherehadtobea
othercausea
dtherewasB7、Abri
gaboutB替换为Aistoserveasacatalyst（催化剂）forB
EgTheuseofmediai
thetwe
tieswastoserveasacatalystfortherevolutio
aryideasthatwerecirculatio
8、SthattractSb替换为Sthsparko
e’si
terest
EgThefirstse
te
ce“Fa
cyalady”immediatelysparkthereader’si
terest9、Sbwill
otdo…替换为Sbbeleastlikelytodo…
10、Sthisgoodbecause…替换为Sthdisti
guishesitselfi
partby…EgTheessaydisti
guishesitselfi
partbyitsexcelle
torga
izatio
11、Eacho
emakesalittleco
tributio
butwetogetherca
achievemuchmore替换为Eachi
dividualca
o
lyaddo
esmallru
gtotheladderbuttogetherweca
climbtothemoo
12、Although替换为While……
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guptome
i
somespheresofmoder
lifr