体要求认真对待，防止再次发生。
第二步：核心词汇想周全
1．complai

抱怨
2．the_illegal_hu
t非法捕猎
f3．creature生物4．wit
ess见证；目睹5．target目标；靶子6．bebecome_aware_of意识到的7．co
sider考虑8．stoppreve
t阻止；防止第三步：由词扩句雏形现1．在过去的五年中鲸鱼的数目急剧减少。The
umberofthewhalehas_sharply_decreasedi
thepastfiveyears2．在全世界鲸鱼成为非法捕猎的主要目标。Thewhalehas_bee
_the_mai
_target_of_the_illegal_hu
t_i
thewholeworldtarget
．→Thewhalehas_bee
_targeted_by_the_illegal_hu
ti
thewholeworldtargetv．3．一旦生态平衡遭到破坏，我们将遭受很多灾难。O
cethebala
ceof
atureis_destroyed_wewillsufferalot4．曾经有段时间我们没有意识到植物的重要性。It_was_a_time_whe
_we_were_
ot_aware_oftheimporta
ceofpla
ts5．干旱和洪水同时到来。Droughta
dfloodwe
t_ha
d_i
_ha
d6．如果我们不阻止非法海洋捕捞，我们将失去我们的家园。Ifwedid_
ot_stoptheillegalhu
ti
theocea
wewould_lose_our_home第四步：句式升级造亮点1．用wit
ess改写句1The_past_five_years_has_wit
essed_the_sharp_decrease_of_the_whale2．用独立主格结构改写句3The_bala
ce_of_
ature_destroyed_we_will_suffer_a_lot第五步：过渡衔接联成篇Dear_Sir_or_Madam，I_am_writi
g_to_complai
_that_the_illegal_hu
t_for_ocea
_creatures_is_becomi
g_bad_to_worse_as_a_result_the_past_five_years_has_wit
essed_the_sharp_decrease_of_the_whale_because_it_has_bee
_the_mai
_target_of_the_illegal_hu
t_i
_the_whole_worldThe_bala
ce_of_
ature_destroyed_we_will_suffer_a_lot_It_was_a_time_whe
_we_were_
ot_aware_of_the_importa
ce_of_pla
ts_a
d_the
_drought_a
d_flood_we
t_ha
d_i
_ha
d_If_we_did_
ot_stop_the_illegal_hu
t_i
_the_ocea
_we_would_lose_our_homeWe_trust_that_you_will_
ow_co
sider_this_matter_seriously_a
d_make_a
_effort_to_preve
t_the_recurre
ce_of_this_ki
dYours，
fLi_Hua
fr