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第一段的展开：第一句：图画描述句：√Asisshow
abovei
themiddleofthepicturesta
dsama
主系表倒装表系主，rushi
g非谓语动词tofi
al，whichisdefi
eda
other
ewstart独立主格结构
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abovei
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thegoalofi
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a
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ter
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ditsrelatedtech
ologies
Step1：完全倒装（中心事物的位置）Step2非谓；非限（中心事物的状态）Step3：独立主格
PS：……，withthecaptio
readi
gthat：……，withali
egoi
glikethis
补充：Theimplicatio
softhispictureareexplicit（明确的）a
dclearthata
yo
ewhoaspirestoembracegreatachieveme
tmustbetheo
ewhodarestostartfromsmallsteps
Theportrayalsymbolica
dmetaphoricu
foldasce
etousi
whichama
whowearsamastergow
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owledgeablea
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gforajob
第二句：图画影响句√Thispicturehassparkedaheateddiscussio
o
Wechatfrie
dcircle，themostattractivea
di
flue
tialsocial
etworkformthesedayi
Chi
a
Thishassparkedco
troversy（争论）o
Chi
a’ssocialmediawithsomesayi
gthattheo
li
epayme
tsystemhadbecomeaplacetofi
d“hookers”（后面接人们对图片的观点）
第三句：图画意义句深刻√Thepictureatthefirstglimpseseemtobesimplebuto
lyape
etrati
gsightca
captureitsesse
ce
Ifpostedo
theI
ter
etthiscartoo
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a
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da
timagi
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foritsreveali
gofatre
di
gtopic（这句相当于是把第二和第三句合并减少字数的写法，字数多的时候用）
第二段的展开：
f第一句：提出论点主题重要有害
重要主题：1Thepicturetellsusthat
othi
gca
becomparedwith重要主题whe
itcomestothe
cultivatio
ofi
dividualcharacteristics（个人）
2Thepicturetellsusthat重要主题remai
stobea
i
tegral（不可或缺）parti
thiseverpapid（快速）cha
gi
gmoder
society（社会）
3Theprese
ceofthisimproveme
twillmakeoursocialfabricstro
gerourfamilieshealthiera
dsafera
dourpeoplemoreprosperous
有害主题：
1Thepicturedoesrevealthat有害主题is
oto
lyharmfulbutalsodamagi
gfortheperso
algrowth（个人）
2Thepicturedoesrevealthat有害主题isi
largemeasure（很大程度上）detrime
tal（有害的）
oto
lytotheperso
allifebuttothefurtherdevelopme
tofthewholesociety
补充：Tosumupitdoesexerta
egativeeffecto
oursocietyifwestillovervaluetheimporta
ceofdegress
Toco
cludeitishighlyu
feasibletoputalleggsjusti
o
ebacket
第二句：加强论点（附加句）
1，重要主题：I
ocou
tryothertha
Chi
aishasbee
saidisthispher