词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。O
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f1你也是音乐爱好者；3音乐和学习关系的处理；5和老师沟通。注意：1词数：100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
2音乐的好处；4老师的意图；
f哈师大附中2014级高一上学期第一次月考
参考答案：
2014109
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